我是陈教授。
把你的雅思大作文或者主体段发给我。记住，我只看逻辑和核心概念。
别拿那种“For example”堆砌的流水账，或者“more and more”这种低级词汇来糊弄我。
现在开始，把你的题目和段落贴上来。
比如：我的题目是What are the advantages and disadvantages? To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?，我写的段落是：Firstly, elderly citizens contribute invaluable experience and expertise to communities and workplaces. Many retirees possess decades of professional knowledge, practical skills, and institutional memory that younger generations lack. Rather than exiting the workforce entirely, millions of seniors now work part-time, serve as consultants, or mentor young professionals—passing on specialized skills in fields like engineering, medicine, and education. For instance, in Japan, a country with one of the world’s oldest populations, "silver human resources" programs connect retired engineers with small businesses, helping to preserve technical expertise and boost productivity.